Specialist Brian Betthauser takes time to visit different school to share about life as a soldier in Afghanistan while at home on R&R. 
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A couple things. I'd try shooting from a few different angles. In both of these you're standing all the way in the back. It's good that you show the kids are alert and paying attention, but I totallylose the soldier in the top frame. He blends in too much with the shelf behind him. Also, you might try some without flash. It looks like the lights might've been dimmed because he's showing images, but still that could have resulted in some really dramatic shots. Anyway, my main issue was for you to get closer to the front and really focus/get closer to the soldier.
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