This was a picture that I took of a girl that had just got a newspaper out and was walking down the sidewalk.
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This is a good photo and i like how it was just spur of the moment but it looks like the like is coming out of the top of her head
ReplyDeleteAll the light poles and overhangs create really interesting lines on the left side.
ReplyDeleteI feel like I'm leaving mostly negative comments today but it's kind of an awkward moment with the eye contact here. It's almost like the girl is thinking "Why is that person taking my picture?" I think this could be improved, either with a panning technique or even a wide angle, or just something as simple as her looking down at the paper, anything besides her looking at the camera.
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